Waiting on the wind

He was a leaf
Sitting on the edge of a cliff
Torn
Between wanting to rest
And needing to explore
Choices
Simply going through the motions in life
Or living it in harmony with his soul
He wanted to make someone else
Responsible for his decision
If things went awry
He wanted to be able to place blame
Wind refused assistance
Wise to wait
Sitting still
The leaf would become stagnant and whither
To know peace within
It meant change
He called to the wind
I have decided
Help me to fly
Wind embraced him
Advising him of the reality
The journey will be difficult at times
You will feel tattered and worn
But keep faith
I will always lift you up

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52 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Oliana
    Feb 02, 2016 @ 23:25:44

    This is so beautiful and hopeful!

  2. Colors of Sky
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 00:18:31

    Aww . maybe wind is himself.😊 so sweet. .lines

  3. Nicodemas
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 00:19:13

    This is deeply beautiful?

  4. Nicodemas
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 00:20:36

    That is a statement – not question! Please change it a typo.

  5. Sherri Of Palm Springs
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 00:28:28

    Today I just put in the image and a little write, and so close to what you were saying in your poem…done beautifully my friend, a reblog on sherris sharing…
    the image you have below is almost the exact image that is on a video I have on right now…it is just sounds and waves…you picked up my brain wave or visa virsa
    Beautiful…love it
    Sherri

  6. philosophermouseofthehedge
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 00:29:54

    I love the realization and bravery of the choice – and the reassurance

  7. Sherri Of Palm Springs
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 00:29:57

    Reblogged this on and commented:
    lovely

  8. ihatepoetry
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 01:44:32

    Excellent parable about the necessity to take chances to be truly alive. Loved the leaf, loved the wind, loved this poem. Thanks, Mosk

    • busymindthinking
      Feb 03, 2016 @ 01:59:15

      Good day to you Mosk. πŸ™‚ Chances are necessary, you’re right. Thank you again for your kind comments. Did you get my message on site or here that I loved what you wrote for the picture you used? It meant a lot to me and I wanted you to know.

      • ihatepoetry
        Feb 03, 2016 @ 17:33:21

        Yes, I did. And, thanks for letting me use your pic. You’re quite a good photographer.

      • busymindthinking
        Feb 03, 2016 @ 20:40:56

        That comment held more meaning then you can know. I use a phone to take pictures as my hand are affected by Lyme disease, and I can manage with a phone on good days. Thank you for kindness. I am humbled and honored you used the pic. Have an amazing day and thank you for touching mine.

  9. Trini Lind
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 02:19:24

    Beautiful!! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ‘ΌπŸ»

  10. MichelleMarie
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 02:22:41

    This is beautiful B we sure spend a lot of time waiting don’t we? I was just thinking about that!

  11. v4vikey
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 04:07:04

    Very Beautiful Words β™₯β™₯πŸ’•

  12. IreneDesign2011
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 05:03:31

    Beautiful and thoughtful Belinda πŸ˜€

  13. Heartafire
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 05:13:31

    This is a masterpiece of messaging, a lovely moral woven between the lines. I adore the personification of the leaf and it’s quandary, to fly on or remain stagnant. A brilliant piece of poetry Belinda, well done! xx

  14. Colors of Sky
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 06:22:50

    Hey ya Belindaaaa i can not comment on my post (there is a problem) myself is Cela. My name…😊

  15. Writing to Freedom
    Feb 03, 2016 @ 15:10:34

    Beautiful imagery and analogy for how to choose and cooperate with life.
    blessings my friend…

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